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unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 12:10 am
by BroBotik
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 7:47 am
by wub
This was pretty horrible listening...just sounds like a bass patch with some heavily distorted drums under it. Am usually a fan of the lo-fi vibe, but this sounds very amateurish and hard to follow.
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 8:43 pm
by Climax
I think you just need some melodic element to help the track flow better, like wub said it doesn't have much direction
The bass is ok, but the percussion and melody needs to be addressed to get it really flowing.
Good start tho!
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 3:58 am
by Maccaveli
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 4:16 am
by OfficialDAPT
Maccaveli wrote:
cmon man at least he's trying
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 5:57 am
by aeherts12
people are so much freaking nicer on soundcloud.. smh. props for putting this up man. cant stand people who come into these things and talk crap
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 6:11 am
by Maccaveli
Wub and Climax were giving their honest opinions, and I pretty much agreed with everything they're saying so I posted that image I've been looking for an excuse to use for ages... problem? Sometimes people need to hear negative feedback.
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 4:24 pm
by BroBotik
thanks for the harsh feedback lols, and it is amateur i am not professional, so how about not being so rude and criticizing me as an amateur and not a professional, and its not just some bass patches and distorted drums, there's a lot more work that went into than that lols
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 4:36 pm
by ehbes
its better to have harsh and honest feedback then kind but false feedback any day of the week....
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:25 am
by SlayTen
Is your artist name really brobotik? LOL man stay away from trying to be so filthy and use more melody
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:17 am
by Maccaveli
SlayTen wrote:Is your artist name really brobotik? LOL man stay away from trying to be so filthy and use more melody
But then he wouldn't be very brobotik...
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 3:28 pm
by BroBotik
exactly i love really heavy robotic dubstep aka brostep, so why would i produce anything else? i create music for me not for anybody else, its what i am into but it seems like u all like the oldschool dubs which is cool but no reason to troll with no real constructive criticism
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 3:32 pm
by BroBotik
ehbrums1 wrote: true but even honest harsh feedback is filtered through the observers perception according to their taste in music
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:12 pm
by ehbes
That's not what I said...
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:01 pm
by Maccaveli
No one's trolling ffs, if you take the attitude that anyone who criticizes your music's opinion doesn't matter cos they don't like your kind of music then you'll never improve as a producer. Wub's comment was completely legitimate but it seems you're just gonna write it off as a troll and keep making the same mistakes.
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:37 pm
by MrMush
Everything sounds flat to me my friend..
Could use alot of refurbishing
Im still learning myself.. Keep doin your craft bro
http://soundcloud.com/mrmush-1/cruncha
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:19 pm
by BroBotik
Maccaveli wrote:lols i got no constructive criticism of any sort, he said my drums were distorted with random bass patches, which i dont use much distortion on my drums and its not random, its arranged to my liking, and he said its hard to follow and sounds amateurish, which i am amateur lmao, wow thats so much help for me to improve with lols. so all i get out of all this feedback is the rhythm might not be your style, cool
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:27 am
by Maccaveli
BroBotik wrote:Maccaveli wrote:lols i got no constructive criticism of any sort, he said my drums were distorted with random bass patches, which i dont use much distortion on my drums and its not random, its arranged to my liking, and he said its hard to follow and sounds amateurish, which i am amateur lmao, wow thats so much help for me to improve with lols. so all i get out of all this feedback is the rhythm might not be your style, cool
Why the fuck do you keep quoting people and changing what they said??
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:34 am
by ehbes
This is what I dont like about the dubs board, some people cant handle the truth
Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track
Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:06 am
by Mindforce
aeherts12 wrote:people are so much freaking nicer on soundcloud..
that's generally just because they're hoping you'll view and give positive feedback on their own music if they compliment yours. You'd never actually improve from someone saying "niiiiiiice wobblez brah, keep droppn the sick rad trackz! Check out my music 2 plz??"
These guys on DSF are just helping (and actually
helping) you with what your music needs. Most of them give feedback on 10+ new tunes every week, you can't expect them to praise every one of them.