Lakota - Avenger - needs feedback

[Harribo]

just finished a new track



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[wub]

Liking the intro on this, particularly the sub that seems to creep in to begin with. Kick has plenty of power to it, and the snare/clap combo is nice and snappy to cut through the mix. Atmospherics (pads/synths) work well...and the vocal sample is just distorted right to give it the same vibes for the tune.

When the bass kicks in it really hits hard (in a good way). Felt the section between 55s and 2m44s went on a bit too long without any real variation to it...like it was the same section repeated twice with no real changes. Liking the ravey style synths that comes in through the tune.

Really good track this, sound design is on point and the vibe is nice.

[Harribo]

Thanks wub i love how in depth you go with tracks. really good feedback, thanks mate

[outbound]

I have the feeling if this gets played out then chests are gonna get shaken

It does seem to get a bit repetitive maybe a lead could come in that's slightly unnerving (can't think of an example sorry) just to break up the sections a bit more.

[Harribo]

haha i hope so outbound! havnt heard it through a propa system yet!

I was goin for a slow progressive style but alot of people have said the same thing so im gna try more change ups on my next track.