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Puncture - OneTwoParksVIP (Deep)

Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:11 pm
by Puncture
Soundcloud

Love it? Hate it? Any feedback and criticism welcome and appreciated. :4:

Re: Puncture - OneTwoParksVIP (Deep)

Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:34 pm
by PivotAX
Love the intro, practically perfect. Also the jungle feel at 0:55 when the bass kicks in! :D
It might just be my taste in dubstep but I would love it if you made the synth, bass and the kick a bit more powerfull.
The second it drops try to have it incredible, very powerfull and bassy. then keep it at that level and try to decrease the level of power slowly, untill the next drop at 2:32 where you increase the power.
Apart from that it's prefect<3
Cheers,
Traffic.

Re: Puncture - OneTwoParksVIP (Deep)

Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:58 am
by outbound
Cool sounds, the lead sounds a bit distanc'ey but sounds good over a deeper sounding track.

For my crit I'd look into scooping some of the mid out of that pad and compressing it, it is a little wild in some bits,

Other than that good sounds and I like the delays in there.

Re: Puncture - OneTwoParksVIP (Deep)

Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:48 pm
by Puncture
Thanks peeps. Sound advice that I'll keep in mind!