[Demo] Something minimal..

[Tom_ED]

This is one of my first proper tunes , I thought i'd see what others think and see if i could get any advice on how i could maybe make it less repetitive. It's a bit grimey and minimal.. Also still a work in progress and could do with being mixed a lot more but just want to see what could be improved
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Any feedback is appreciated
Thanks

[wub]

The intro is a bit on the sparse side, like there is a lot of space between the hits...interesting percussion hits you've got going on in there though. Liking some of the sounds in this overall, bass is deep if a little repeated, and the percussion is interesting. Maybe a bit of variety of the programming though, it sounds a bit rigid in places

[Tom_ED]

The intro is a bit on the sparse side, like there is a lot of space between the hits...interesting percussion hits you've got going on in there though. Liking some of the sounds in this overall, bass is deep if a little repeated, and the percussion is interesting. Maybe a bit of variety of the programming though, it sounds a bit rigid in places

Yeah i was thinking maybe adding a sample to make the intro less dull, or just add a some different hits or a pad.. After listening back quite a few times i think that that bline needs to be tweaked a bit along with the percussion pattern
Thanks for the words

[coogcoo]

dude i love the hook in this track, wicked.. the drums definitely need lots of EQin and probably some layering, the clap sounds very weak and thin..

[Tom_ED]

I've tried EQing the kick and snare more and have changed the percussion round a little more too
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