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Ok another tune from me,140bpm chill tune.Plenty of sub for all you bass heads.
Again feedback given i will return the favour.
Hope you enjoy.


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Bump,feedback anyone???

This is really good, the melody is beautiful goes very well with the beat. I think using the breakbeat in the second part works very well also. There's good subtle variation throughout so it never feels like it's getting overly repetitive. I don't think you should change anything about it, great work.

The kick seems a bit lifeless.
The sub can be turned up a bit and given a bit more presence/harmonic content.
I feel because the track is quite sparse, the sub should be a bit dirtier maybe.
Nice melodic lines, good ambient work.
The melody seems a bit loud and drowns out the percussion.
Your kick after the break is seriously weak.
Nice delayed, reverbed effects over the top.

It's pretty good, I'd say it just needs a fair bit of finessing.

jeanblanc wrote:This is really good, the melody is beautiful goes very well with the beat. I think using the breakbeat in the second part works very well also. There's good subtle variation throughout so it never feels like it's getting overly repetitive. I don't think you should change anything about it, great work.

Electric_Head wrote:The kick seems a bit lifeless.
The sub can be turned up a bit and given a bit more presence/harmonic content.
I feel because the track is quite sparse, the sub should be a bit dirtier maybe.
Nice melodic lines, good ambient work.
The melody seems a bit loud and drowns out the percussion.
Your kick after the break is seriously weak.
Nice delayed, reverbed effects over the top.

It's pretty good, I'd say it just needs a fair bit of finessing.

Thankyou electric critique taken on board.

Love this
Especially with those strings underneath

Cheers bud

Yeah loving this, the musical elements would stand on their own without the beats. As Electric_Head has already stated the kick is weak after the break. For really powerful meaty kicks and snares I'd recommend "Vengeance Essential House" sample pack, they are perfect for Dubstep and other genres that need heavy percussion. But yeah great track hear in my opinion.