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First crack at a remix lemme know what think....all imput welcome
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I'm not sure this trap tbh.
The mixdown sounds a bit muddy, I think you need to sort out your low-mid frequency bands with some visual EQs.

Trap generally has that long sustaining 808 kick, often quite swingy too.

Hope that helps a little

Thanks for the feedback man. It does help; as far as the kick its an 808 with a lot of low frequency content for weight , layered with a vengeance dubstep kick for punch. I just had cut the lows out in order to make room for the subs. I hate mixdowns i nvr seem to get it right lol. Anyway i guess its time to start revising this tune. as far as arrangement though what did u think?

Arrangement is fine.
What you get in most trap is that the kick drum actually becomes the bassline, so they play it at different pitches to form a bass melody