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*Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:07 am
by 5910
Soundcloud
Here's a tune I'm working on, any feedback would be great.
Re: *Deep - Emotional/melodic* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:51 pm
by 5910
Any chance of a response?
Re: *Deep - Emotional/melodic* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2012 7:33 pm
by audioterminal
5910 wrote:Any chance of a response?
Sounds like there's a problem with your sub bass. In some areas of your tune it's completely inaudible (at least on my setup, which, granted, definitely isn't the best). I'd use a frequency analyzer of some sort to make sure you're not dipping into frequencies below 20hz or lower. Plus, it'll destroy a lot of headroom taking away from the "full" sound of your track. The main idea is there and your percussion is definitely on point.
Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2012 7:47 pm
by 5910
Yeah, I hear that, I was trying to keep it real low, but it doesn't sound bad an octave up I guess. I was trying to write it for club soundsystems as opposed to my own, which is also pretty basic I guess, but it's worked on some tunes more than others.
Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 1:20 am
by zerbaman
I think there's a problem with the sub too. Does anyone else hear that crackle?
Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:15 am
by 5910
could you explain?
Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:15 pm
by outbound
Mixwise like others have said it's struggling in the bass area. Maybe try layering up a soft bass on top to fill things out.
Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 10:54 pm
by Xanthia
Good tune, Like the beat. Are you using loops for the swing feel?
Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:09 am
by 5910
Xanthia wrote:Good tune, Like the beat. Are you using loops for the swing feel?
Thanks
But what do you mean?
I'm using FL studio, so everything is looped really.
Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:18 am
by Kibb
As above, I would fix the bass issues, but regardless, solid tune. It's real chill imo and I enjoyed it completely.

Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:23 am
by 5910
Cheers glad you did.
And yeah, I've changed that. The entire bassline really, not sure if I'm happy with it yet. After a few minutes, they just start to sound off key.
I'll update when things are more stable.
Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:35 am
by Kibb
One thing I've found helpful when getting sub-basslines to fit is to bring them up like 3 octaves so its in the midrange; it makes the tones clearer in my opinion and easier to work with.
Re: *Deep* Bloodlines - wip
Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 2:00 am
by 5910
Yeah I keep doing that an not trusting. I think it's probably due to my general lack of sleep. Been up for most of this week.