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Skure - Logos (dubby, rootsy, "old school")

Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:42 pm
by topmo3
hi there!

Soundcloud

do have a listen and i'd love to hear any feedback you might have. this one's for those summer nights with that special someone. Image

Re: Skure - Logos (dubby, rootsy, "old school")

Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:55 am
by Shum
that synth "horn" melodies are really good, as a suggestion, introduce the horns back at the second drop and then use the rest of the track to slowly wind things down.
arrangement wise you could do a lot more but what you have is more than sufficient.
wobbles could be modulated (in the musical sense) a bit more.
the kick/snare combo is a bit odd for this style of track imo.

love the general vibe of your tune though bro, right up my street. :Z:

Re: Skure - Logos (dubby, rootsy, "old school")

Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 6:21 am
by topmo3
cheers man! you mean the choice of kick and snare samples is a bit odd? all great suggestions, if i go back to working this i'll keep your words in mind.

Re: Skure - Logos (dubby, rootsy, "old school")

Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:30 pm
by outbound
I like the offbeat chord stabs, where's that "Come with it" sample from? sounds familiar

Re: Skure - Logos (dubby, rootsy, "old school")

Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:34 pm
by topmo3
thanks man!

dun kno where it's from actually. probably some soundclash or might even be a tune, got it from a random source.

Re: Skure - Logos (dubby, rootsy, "old school")

Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:02 pm
by jeanblanc
There's a lot of very good elements with this. Agree with the points above and I the bass is sounding strange in parts to me (volume of different notes changes so that some overpower the rest of the music), but I reckon that might have a lot to do with the room I'm in at the moment. I love the meodies and the way all the layers work together. It's got a really feel good atmosphere and I think it would go down brilliantly at a festival.

Re: Skure - Logos (dubby, rootsy, "old school")

Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 7:56 pm
by topmo3
^ cheers man! the volume should be the same, i don't think it changes but some bass notes might sound louder than others. thanks for nice feedback!

Re: Skure - Logos (dubby, rootsy, "old school")

Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:54 pm
by djcosmos
love the vibe on this one. im only listening on headphones but to my taste most of the elements sound a bit too plain and 'clean' if that makes any sense... as in they might benefit from some more FX work (a touch of distortion and reverb here and there)