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Monowàn - Caltrop (Techno-ish ?)

Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:41 pm
by Monowan
Soundcloud

This is kinda...bad taste, I dunno. Basically I created the bass patch by accident and decided to make a full track around it. It's certainly not the style I'd like to be known for and I'll probably end up deleting it but I still want to know if the production is ok. Any thoughts ? Things that are too quiet or too loud ?

Re: Monowàn - Caltrop (Techno-ish ?)

Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 6:38 pm
by Monowan
One and only bump before the thread sinks in oblivion.

Re: Monowàn - Caltrop (Techno-ish ?)

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:43 am
by jeanblanc
production sounds fine to me, some good sounds going on. I'd personally try to do more with the percussion and make it more interesting that way. I like the new element you bring in around 2:50, maybe you could develop that idea to make it more of a melodic progression?

Re: Monowàn - Caltrop (Techno-ish ?)

Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:10 am
by Monowan
Actually there was a chord progression and a pitched clav in an earlier version but I ditched it, maybe I could find a compromise between the two. I agree that the percussions could use some variation. Thank you for listening