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I like most things about the tune in that you've used good sounds and got them working together well. I like the melody although I think you could be adventurous with it and try to out other progressions. The main point I'd make is that it sounds a bit like it is still in sketch mode. I would like to hear you changing it up significantly (ie, have a darker middle section, add elements, change the pace) at some point and then maybe go back to the original idea later in the tune. With more work on the structure, I think the tune has a lot of potential.

thanks for your feedback mate. i agree, it is quite one-dimensional at the moment... i'm still working on it though and i'm expanding the melody, trying to be a bit more adventurous with it

Feeling this, nice one!

ahhhhh bass massage! being a wip I would ad in a change in beat towards the end to build, then have the sub turn into like a square lead with more note variation