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professor Flip
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Hi. I'm new here. Can some please give me some critical feed

Post by professor Flip » Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:31 pm

Hig guys/girls.

Please can someone give me some feedback on my dubstep track. its my first ever onoe.
I make D&B normally and thought i'd give this a go.
what do you think? good or bad is always appreciated.
thx

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Post by oprs » Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:34 pm

replace the talking vowel. please
the percussion is smooth, the d&b influence is there.
i just think if you changed up to a sound that is so played out its almost unbearable to hear anymore.
just my opinion take it how you want.
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Post by Blazer » Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:19 pm

oprs wrote: i just think if you changed up to a sound that is so played out its almost unbearable to hear anymore.
I don't understand this :|

I thought the synthesis was quite good actually, except from occasionally it faded out or got quieter, but this is the most imaginative way i've heard sample and hold being used (off the top of my head anyway ha)

Pretty good for a WIP, i didn't even realize it was at first haha

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Post by professor Flip » Thu Aug 23, 2012 3:44 pm

thanks people.
really appreciate it.
will stay away from the vocal filters from now on then. heard them on the radio so thought it might be the in thing.
you gotta love z3ta. its like it was made for dubstep.

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Post by Bionox » Thu Aug 23, 2012 3:52 pm

This is definently dnb influenced. If you wan't to make a more dubsteppy track you try a clearer build, and really bring down the levels before "dropping again." I can see where you focused on that at 1:08ish. So far this just isn't structured like your regular dubstep track.

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Post by professor Flip » Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:13 am

thanks man. really appreciate the feedback ;-)

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Post by professor Flip » Sun Sep 09, 2012 8:35 pm

soon to be released. watch this space. its taken a wee turn.
thanks for the feedback peeps. Helped shape the end result. ;-)

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Post by killakam98 » Sun Sep 09, 2012 11:42 pm

professor Flip wrote:
you gotta love z3ta. its like it was made for dubstep.
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Post by nanocloud » Mon Sep 10, 2012 1:20 pm

Wow, I think this is awesome. I really like the filters. There's awesome synthesis going on in this, and some really cool sounds. Sounds like you have a fair amount of production knowledge, a lot cleaner than anything I could make.

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Post by professor Flip » Tue Sep 11, 2012 10:23 pm

thanks man. think i'll make some more dubstep after this. kinda enjoy it :o)

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Post by Today » Tue Sep 11, 2012 10:31 pm

professor Flip wrote: will stay away from the vocal filters from now on then. heard them on the radio so thought it might be the in thing.
what troubles me is that as good as you are, you're eager as fuck to both use and NOT use a sound/technique based on "what you thought was the in thing" and that someone here just told you to stop, respectively


all i'm saying is make your own decisions
we don't need people shaping their sound to appease us
if you like that sound fucking use it in your tunes

some people will love it, others wont


other than that, i have no feelings toward the track itself, good or bad... not really into aggro stuff much. but the sounds are sick and i actually like the way your structure is unique. might take some practice for a DJ to spin it properly, but why should every tune be built the same.. DJs can adapt to new shit, one would hope
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Post by elyhess » Wed Sep 12, 2012 1:56 am

as opposed to what some others said, i actually think that wobble is sick as fuck! this track really sounds huge haha. all that i would say is like, it sounds like it needs to be heavier, idk if that means volume wise, but i feel like compression on several of the tracks elements would make it fuckin like bang crazy hard. i'm honestly not sure what it is, it just needs a little more punch, and louder bass!! sick!

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Post by Endo Andre » Wed Sep 12, 2012 3:19 am

sounds awesome I like the sound nad quality nice screeches! yeah the vocals off! sounds too dnB still but its really good its yours style imo!

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Post by professor Flip » Mon Sep 24, 2012 7:57 pm

thanks man.
yeah, its gonna sound D&B ish as thats what i tend to lean too.
But thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it.

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Post by Today » Mon Sep 24, 2012 8:29 pm

tbh i hate filth but this tracks proper rowdy
nice one OP
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Post by professor Flip » Sat Sep 29, 2012 10:34 am

thx man

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