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Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 11:25 am
by aleksander9
In this song i have experimented with making melodies that fit together. It Starts Jazzy with the piano and bass theme and evolves into the main melody. At the end i use all the melodies i have created together.

Hope you enjoy, feedback is greatly appreciated

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Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 3:15 pm
by chazzzza
it seems a little bare to be honest but the melody are good, just not good enough on their own.

Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:53 pm
by oprs
is that the brittany spears piano in the beginning?


Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:08 pm
by Aurokh
Worryingly I listned through the whole Britney Spears song lol. As for the track aleksandr, I think you have a good base with the melodies, they're interplaying well. I personally would look at beefing up the percussion a bit, more presence on the snare maybe and general eq? Just my 2 cents :)

Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:14 pm
by clayrocks
oprs wrote:is that the brittany spears piano in the beginning?

:lol:
I like the song man but i think the piano notes could be altered to make it sound more 'natural' Put a little more variation in :)

Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (elTectronica,Chillout)

Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 10:06 am
by aleksander9
Thanks for the feedback! Its sometimes hard to see some obvious things after i have worked alot. Will Beef it up with more progressive drums and humanize the piano part.