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LobeLow
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Wanderer - Joey P

Post by LobeLow » Tue Sep 18, 2012 5:48 pm

Any feedback appreciated!
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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by chazzzza » Tue Sep 18, 2012 8:40 pm

love the way you introduce the percussion at the start as well as the vocals but it could use a little more melody.
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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by MORZ42 » Tue Sep 18, 2012 9:03 pm

The subs are really well done! Good job.
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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by UBLF » Wed Sep 19, 2012 3:36 am

I agree, the subs are fantastic! Love the delicate melodies woven in. I'm sure there could be some variation in the melody, no matter where you take this tune - I'm digging it!
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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by UBLF » Mon Oct 08, 2012 2:59 am

I'll bump this tune! Good stuff!
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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by LobeLow » Mon Oct 08, 2012 5:06 pm

Big ups man!
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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by cubefruit » Mon Oct 08, 2012 8:28 pm

Very nice, very deep :) Good job has a bit of a tribal/funky feel
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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by LobeLow » Mon Oct 08, 2012 8:51 pm

Glad you like it man :)
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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by koncide » Tue Oct 09, 2012 12:17 pm

Me likey super huge massive sub. :Q:
Melodic deepness from my mind.

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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by LobeLow » Tue Oct 09, 2012 3:15 pm

Respect mate ;)
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Re: Wanderer - Joey P

Post by Electric_Head » Tue Oct 09, 2012 3:40 pm

Nice work.
In general it's sounding great but it can use some variation to the melody but imo for me the most impoirtant element is atmosphere.
Bring some sweeping pads in, brooding background, etc.
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