Some feedback on my first 2 tracks please?

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axim
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Some feedback on my first 2 tracks please?

Post by axim » Sun Nov 11, 2012 3:27 pm

Hey everybody, as you can read in my introduction post, I began producing about a year ago, and just recently got my first tunes out.
I'd really like some feedback on my production, which I know is probably pretty messy, so I'm hoping for some pointers on what I need to work on. :)

invisibled
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Re: Some feedback on my first 2 tracks please?

Post by invisibled » Sun Nov 11, 2012 8:05 pm

hey dude, just a few things i heard

1. tighten that intro synth, put it in the grid. Becuase there isn't a lot happening there to keep the beat, you'll want it to roll a lot smoother
2. add some noise risers, atmosphearic stuff, background sounds. It will give a lot of depth to your track.
3. maybe back off the grit on your main basses, try to make them a bit crisper and cleaner

just my opinion, go hard mang!
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Umea
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Re: Some feedback on my first 2 tracks please?

Post by Umea » Sun Nov 11, 2012 8:36 pm

Maybe add a sidecain compression to the first track's wobble because you cannot hear the drums anymore oO
reverb on snare to make it deeper and maybe remove the bitcrusher. it sounds a bit ... too filthy at the wrong places if you understand :D
the intropart is quite too long ( around 16 bars is enough)

the second tune is so groovy :D just mix it down or try so and add a bit more depth with reverbs etc.

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