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Really nice interesting ideas you've got here, I love your sound design and sample choice.

However, the mix could be a lot cleaner - try taking out more low end from everything but your basses and kick drums. I also find the metallic 'clang' sound (kind of in place of a snare) to ba lacking any kind of punch, something it really needs to my ears - compression could help it a bit but to really bring it out I think you need to layer something else on top, a quick sharp percussion sound such as a rimshot sample.