Michael Jackson - Thriller (Neko Remix) [brostep]

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Michael Jackson - Thriller (Neko Remix) [brostep]

Post by nek0 » Sat Dec 22, 2012 11:29 pm

Feedback appreciated! Please take a few moments out of your day to notice anything I could start working on to improve!

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Re: Michael Jackson - Thriller (Neko Remix) [brostep]

Post by Samuel_L_Damnson » Sun Dec 23, 2012 12:07 am

The tune seems a bit crowded if you get me, Maybe focus on one midrange sound rather than all of them + that super saw lead to get more of a "together" sound :)
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Re: Michael Jackson - Thriller (Neko Remix) [brostep]

Post by phonomancer » Sun Dec 23, 2012 12:45 am

I agree with Sinestepper, some of the drop synths don't quite fit together, and it just ends up sounding kinda hectic and crowded. decent composition and sampling though, so keep working at it!
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Re: Michael Jackson - Thriller (Neko Remix) [brostep]

Post by wub » Sun Dec 23, 2012 2:57 pm

What's been said above really...the mixdown feels very cluttered, the vocal in particular is getting a bit smothered considering it should be one of the driving elements in the tune.

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