Dj Panik & Yox - Leaving Earth (Needs FEEDBACK !)

[djpanikdnb]

hi guys , i would love to get your feedback on this one , as i am mainly a DnB producer
that's the first dubstep tune i did with Yox , and only did one or two on my own before .

many thanks for your time & give me a link if you want feedback on yours , no problemo
here it is :

Soundcloud

[wub]

The kick is a lot of thud and not much punch, it's having trouble cutting through the mixdown when the midrange etc are all firing. Maybe some subtractive EQing to create a bit of space for it when it hits?

[djpanikdnb]

The kick is a lot of thud and not much punch, it's having trouble cutting through the mixdown when the midrange etc are all firing. Maybe some subtractive EQing to create a bit of space for it when it hits?

thx for your reply Wub
i will try to EQ the rest of the tune to make it fit , or maybe replace it .

except the kick , the tune was OK ?

[wub]

Snare was a bit on the loud side and sounded like it was causing or at least contributing to a bit of distortion in the higher end frequencies, particularly around 1m49s where it's quite noticeable.

Melody you have going on is nice, as is the vocal, but both of those elements could maybe do with being brought up a bit in the mix, assuming you want the piece to be hook driven.

[djpanikdnb]

yes i agree , i think tune is a bit too distorted maybe ?
or not enough clear / clean ?
for me , the hook was the basses (formants etc) and vocal was the icing on the cake

[wub]

The distortion should take care of itself, or at least reduce, once you address some of the EQing issues.