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[ Näjt ] - The Fear

Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 4:49 pm
by näjt
a slice of bizzare darkness for ya.

listen

Let me know what you think, I really want feedback on this, especially if you fucking hated it, I can't get better unless I know where i'm going wrong.

Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:32 pm
by näjt
well thanks for your support guys....

Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 12:39 am
by climate
nice, but to be honest a little boring. you used some interesting sounds but for me it was lacking something. needs more percussive elements and the bass to change up a bit to suit my personal taste. still cool vibe with lots of potential.

Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 3:35 am
by näjt
thank you, I was thinking about doing something with the bass, but I couldn't figure out where to go with it really.

Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:15 am
by sean_demis
i like it. the title suits it. i see it as the soundtrack for some twisted or abstract video or movie or tv show. shit, it would even be perfect for opening credits of a horror movie. (give it to film students ;) )

you could exploit that spooky vibe on dis one.... maybe tone down the broken beats in the end and solidify the arrangement

Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:33 am
by horse
fully agree with the film credits comment - i see it soundtracking some kind of twisted seven style film
really like the drums/percussion, very anemic and clicky

if it was my track i would make more of the static/scratchy noises in the intro - build the atmosphere right up a bit more, get some of those pops/crackles in there. put some field recordings in there. faraway voices, abandoned warehouses

and boost the sub - needs weight

other than that its there. love it

Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 9:01 pm
by näjt
thanks for the feedback guys, I really like the idea of adding static and field recordings to it, I might start doing that.