Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep) Update

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Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep) Update

Post by zenith » Thu Jan 03, 2013 1:57 am

Soundcloud I've been working on this track for about a month now and i need to know if i need to give it maybe another week or another month. SO feel free to leave feedback and point out my flaws (Updated track is down below)
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Re: Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep)

Post by wub » Thu Jan 03, 2013 7:41 am

Snare is a bit on the thin side, maybe look at layering. Drums could do with maybe being a little louder as well. The programming arrangement on the wobbly midrange could maybe benefit from some variation towards the final third of the tune to keep things interesting.

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Re: Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep)

Post by zenith » Thu Jan 03, 2013 9:06 pm

wub wrote:Snare is a bit on the thin side, maybe look at layering. Drums could do with maybe being a little louder as well. The programming arrangement on the wobbly midrange could maybe benefit from some variation towards the final third of the tune to keep things interesting.
Thanks for the advice i'll probably work on it for another 3 days

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Re: Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep)

Post by zenith » Fri Jan 04, 2013 2:57 am

Bump! for more feedback

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Re: Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep)

Post by zenith » Sat Jan 05, 2013 5:12 pm

Bump

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Re: Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep)

Post by zenith » Tue Jan 08, 2013 12:29 am

Minor updates coming soon for this track

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Re: Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep)

Post by Lateral_Sync » Tue Jan 08, 2013 12:52 am

Interesting work on the synths. I kind of like the creepy evil vibe it has. It seems to get to be too loud at 2:16 and gets distorted.
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Re: Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep) Update

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Re: Zeenith-Dissenters are silenced (Dubstep) Update

Post by vault » Sat Jan 12, 2013 6:52 pm

You should totally consider boosting up the drums, because the drums are the main element in a song. Also, try playing with the Wow Filter, tbh, it seems like you just lfo'd it and let it like that :D

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