BRKFTH - need some advices on my tune
Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2013 1:38 pm
Hey guys, I'm totally new here and glad that I found you. I'm french "bedroom" producer based in Netherlands and I really need some feeedback/help to go on.
So here I am with a totally unfinished and unmixed track, kinda glitch-hop style:
Soundcloud
I always have difficulties to finish a track when it comes to structure and buiding up nice evolutions, breakdowns etc... So far I'm relatively happy with the "main section" of the track but I'm quite stucked now and can't figure out how to make the track flow. I wonder how to make natural transitions between the different parts. For example, when the drop comes up after the intro, I found it's going down in intensity, can't figure what's missing to make this bigger. Also think I could bring up a new element (perhaps something melodic that goes on top) after the breakdown (which I'm totally unsatisfied with at the moment...), but can't find anything satisfying... Perhaps I should also add some FX along the track...
So could you please take 4 minutes to listen and don't hesitate to be tough. Any comments are welcome, especially about those points, structure, transition, building up a track... For now I didn't focus at all on mixing, some drum elements will be changed (toms, snare...) so my apologize if some elements sounds crappy. Cheers.
So here I am with a totally unfinished and unmixed track, kinda glitch-hop style:
Soundcloud
I always have difficulties to finish a track when it comes to structure and buiding up nice evolutions, breakdowns etc... So far I'm relatively happy with the "main section" of the track but I'm quite stucked now and can't figure out how to make the track flow. I wonder how to make natural transitions between the different parts. For example, when the drop comes up after the intro, I found it's going down in intensity, can't figure what's missing to make this bigger. Also think I could bring up a new element (perhaps something melodic that goes on top) after the breakdown (which I'm totally unsatisfied with at the moment...), but can't find anything satisfying... Perhaps I should also add some FX along the track...
So could you please take 4 minutes to listen and don't hesitate to be tough. Any comments are welcome, especially about those points, structure, transition, building up a track... For now I didn't focus at all on mixing, some drum elements will be changed (toms, snare...) so my apologize if some elements sounds crappy. Cheers.
