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Yes Rudeboy

Post by citizen six » Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:50 pm

If ya gotta spare coupla minutes check out my first tune. It's called Yes Rudeboy and you can dl it from myspz page:

http://www.myspace.com/citizensix

It's a bit different I guess - 40bpm and a vox line starting 3 minutes in, but hey I like it.

I'm totally new to production and still have heaps to learn, so any advice would be awesome

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Post by citizen six » Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:57 pm

Hey, any of you guys had a chance to check out my choon?

Lemme know if you do and what you think.

I can hack it if you hate it :wink:
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Post by d-T-r » Fri Aug 24, 2007 1:13 pm

quite liking it. very spacious. not too sure about the orchestral type hits. however they do create abit of suspense. vocal didnt really sit well for me though. good stuff for first tune though. nice one.
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Post by citizen six » Sat Aug 25, 2007 10:09 am

Thanks for the comments - hugely appreciated

I think I tried to cram a lot in cos it's all new. Am working on a new tune now that is much more minimal.

But it's slow going for me

thx again

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Post by citizen six » Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:04 pm

c'mon any you other fellas got feebacky for this aussie?

don't be shy :?
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Post by Tangka » Thu Aug 30, 2007 7:14 pm

i on the other hand like the hits

i'd tone down the percussion just a tad, make it more coherent or whatever
and pull up some more bassline

some of the samples are annoying, i like the female rapping at the end

all in all, its a cool track

as a beginner your ability to tend to detail is amazing. you have more to
learn in the realm of effects, but it seems that you can get your idea across
well, which is hard to do.

serious props man. i'll bet my bones you'll start making hits in no time as
long as you keep it up
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Post by "kzy" ras:man » Fri Aug 31, 2007 4:18 pm

yeah man i like it keep it up for a first tune id be well proud!
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Post by citizen six » Sat Sep 08, 2007 12:15 pm

Cheers for the feedback and advice. It's keepin me going

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