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Yes Rudeboy

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:50 pm
by citizen six
If ya gotta spare coupla minutes check out my first tune. It's called Yes Rudeboy and you can dl it from myspz page:

http://www.myspace.com/citizensix

It's a bit different I guess - 40bpm and a vox line starting 3 minutes in, but hey I like it.

I'm totally new to production and still have heaps to learn, so any advice would be awesome

peace

Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 12:57 pm
by citizen six
Hey, any of you guys had a chance to check out my choon?

Lemme know if you do and what you think.

I can hack it if you hate it :wink:

Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 1:13 pm
by d-T-r
quite liking it. very spacious. not too sure about the orchestral type hits. however they do create abit of suspense. vocal didnt really sit well for me though. good stuff for first tune though. nice one.

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 10:09 am
by citizen six
Thanks for the comments - hugely appreciated

I think I tried to cram a lot in cos it's all new. Am working on a new tune now that is much more minimal.

But it's slow going for me

thx again

peace

Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:04 pm
by citizen six
c'mon any you other fellas got feebacky for this aussie?

don't be shy :?

Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 7:14 pm
by Tangka
i on the other hand like the hits

i'd tone down the percussion just a tad, make it more coherent or whatever
and pull up some more bassline

some of the samples are annoying, i like the female rapping at the end

all in all, its a cool track

as a beginner your ability to tend to detail is amazing. you have more to
learn in the realm of effects, but it seems that you can get your idea across
well, which is hard to do.

serious props man. i'll bet my bones you'll start making hits in no time as
long as you keep it up

Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 4:18 pm
by "kzy" ras:man
yeah man i like it keep it up for a first tune id be well proud!

Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 12:15 pm
by citizen six
Cheers for the feedback and advice. It's keepin me going

peace