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grahamgawthorpe
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Focus - Original Dubstep

Post by grahamgawthorpe » Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:09 am

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Murder Musket
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Re: Focus - Original Dubstep

Post by Murder Musket » Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:22 am

This is purely subjective, but I feel the "drop it" sample is pretty cheesy.
I like the melodic elements here, especially that main melody at 0:14; the drums are fine, but I'm not a fan of the drop. the sound design is kinda of lacking/generic IMO, and the arrangement feels a bit cluttered, especially around 1:43
not bad overall, my advice would be to focus on improving your sound design. keep it up :)
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Re: Focus - Original Dubstep

Post by grahamgawthorpe » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:30 am

Thanks! Appreciate the feedback!
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