Batsy - Devour (Darkstep) [want constructive criticism!!!!!]

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Batsy - Devour (Darkstep) [want constructive criticism!!!!!]

Post by Batsy » Fri Apr 19, 2013 9:49 pm


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Re: Batsy - Devour (Darkstep) [want constructive criticism!!

Post by SKIN E » Sat Apr 20, 2013 11:52 am

I heard this track somewhere on the production forum, thinking about it... was in the DB glitch 2 thread, sounding seriously evil man, some of the gated growl are a little harsh in my opinion, pretty dark track indeed! :)

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Re: Batsy - Devour (Darkstep) [want constructive criticism!!

Post by Batsy » Sat Apr 20, 2013 6:58 pm

SKIN E wrote:I heard this track somewhere on the production forum, thinking about it... was in the DB glitch 2 thread, sounding seriously evil man, some of the gated growl are a little harsh in my opinion, pretty dark track indeed! :)
Haha yeah i did post it in there to show them. Appreciate the feedback!

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Re: Batsy - Devour (Darkstep) [want constructive criticism!!

Post by AMG » Sat Apr 20, 2013 7:44 pm

haha awesome intro. Is that DBZ? it's gotta be some anime I'm guessing. Wicked sounding tune. very aggresive use of the synths and how sharply they sound sonically as well as the rapid increments of their usage. The cocking right before the waves is perfect. Great tune dude. I think the length is perfect too. 2 mins and you just bust out a wide range of sounds and still manage not to make it sound rushed. It just develops perfectly imo. Thanks for sharing.

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Re: Batsy - Devour (Darkstep) [want constructive criticism!!

Post by Today » Sat Apr 20, 2013 9:50 pm

ehi dunno i dig aggressive stuff i just wasn't feeling much groove on this one and there's definitely no weight i'm afraid.

the rhythms are all rigid and choppy, which can be cool but in this case i don't think the parts gel together
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Re: Batsy - Devour (Darkstep) [want constructive criticism!!

Post by Batsy » Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:23 am

Thanks guys. Yeah the rhythm is very choppy but i just felt like making a really glitchy track. Definitely need to make the low end stand out more too.

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