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TUNE IN PROGRESS Feedback needed & returned (Chill/Dubstep)
Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 2:08 pm
by MORZ42
Soundcloud
Give an honest listen if you have the time. This song is heading out for mixing and mastering services and I want to do my absolute best on it. Still haven't figured out the chorus, so if you have any suggestions--that's be much appreciated. Drop me links to your stuff too, I'll return all feedback.
Re: TUNE IN PROGRESS Feedback needed & returned (Chill/Dubst
Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 5:56 pm
by HoogerJ
Link not working, mate.
Re: TUNE IN PROGRESS Feedback needed & returned (Chill/Dubst
Posted: Thu May 09, 2013 4:27 am
by MORZ42
Fixed! My bad--first time using private links.
Re: TUNE IN PROGRESS Feedback needed & returned (Chill/Dubst
Posted: Thu May 09, 2013 5:37 am
by BassGorilla
Yo man, nice track, great sample you chose!
I would say work on the bass sound. Right now it sounds like a very thin reece if that makes sense. It might suit the track more if you use a low pass filter on it and get rid of the upper mids, so it's more sub style. And do you have a sub bass going on another channel? That would thicken up the low end if you don't.
If you use NI Massive, I would say try using the smooth square wavetable to get that thick low end kind of bass sound I'm trying to describe to you. Hope that helps.
You could also fatten the whole thing up with a limiter on the master channel, but don't crush everything up against it too high. I guess that's mastering anyway.
Re: TUNE IN PROGRESS Feedback needed & returned (Chill/Dubst
Posted: Thu May 09, 2013 8:46 am
by HoogerJ
Overall production quality is excellent. As BassGorilla said, I would dial in some more sub. Not too much, but missing some solid 50 -60hz low end. You could use a glitch/bass/synth-element around the 2.10 mark for some variation. And personally I would tone down the high-end in your reese (chorus). It made it a bit to harsh to blend in naturally with the other elements of your track.
Just my two cents. Still learning and improving myself every single day...
Re: TUNE IN PROGRESS Feedback needed & returned (Chill/Dubst
Posted: Fri May 10, 2013 5:01 am
by MORZ42
Thanks guys, that was definitely helpful. I added the sub like you said for thickness and that did magic. Still struggling on the variation part and not quite sure how to make it more interesting, but it'll come to me soon!

Re: TUNE IN PROGRESS Feedback needed & returned (Chill/Dubst
Posted: Fri May 10, 2013 12:06 pm
by Sensory Addiction
I love the drums if you could just get that distorted bass a little heavier you would have a heavyweight of a tune with this one im really digging the feel of this its really well done im no professional but as a listener right now that's what I would improve on
Re: TUNE IN PROGRESS Feedback needed & returned (Chill/Dubst
Posted: Sat May 11, 2013 8:50 pm
by MORZ42
Sensory Addiction wrote:I love the drums if you could just get that distorted bass a little heavier you would have a heavyweight of a tune with this one im really digging the feel of this its really well done im no professional but as a listener right now that's what I would improve on
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