Sovereign - Demon Blood (140 BPM Dubstep) Feedback please!

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ThisIsSovereign
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Sovereign - Demon Blood (140 BPM Dubstep) Feedback please!

Post by ThisIsSovereign » Thu Jun 20, 2013 7:32 pm

Latest track I've done, I think it's actually my favorite track I've produced so far. Really want to see what others think about it and want any feedback you got!

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Big ups in advance.

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Re: Sovereign - Demon Blood (140 BPM Dubstep) Feedback pleas

Post by zantmarcusmusic » Thu Jun 20, 2013 7:55 pm

Hi Sovereign!!

I'm really like your track, those strings together with the vocals make it quite original.
I love the way yo build the intro, nice percussion there.
This, in fact, could be an awesome trap track. Those Low pitched vocals and the drums would fit perfectly with a nice 808 bass. (But maybe you're not a big trap fan, me neither)

The only thing that lacks in this track is more bass. Take your time and make a nice sub and you'll have an awesome track ;-)

Good luck man!

...if you could also gime me some feedback on my track, it's not as good as yours, I'm sure you can give me some tips
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=274403

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Re: Sovereign - Demon Blood (140 BPM Dubstep) Feedback pleas

Post by MrPies » Thu Jun 20, 2013 10:46 pm

Hi,
I like the vocal, original and pitched down very catchy!
The bass synth sounds a little weak to me, maybe try layering it a little? Also, I think that the whip like sound is cancelling out the sound of your snare. If you want to make your snare a little more prominent try high passing the whip sound/ eq'ing.
The strings sound a little artificial to me - is it a stock sound from your DAW? Maybe try some other samples? Perhaps these (no idea if they are good for production to be honest) http://www.philharmonia.co.uk/thesounde ... s/library/

The vocal hook is still well and truly stuck in my head....well done :)

Cheers,
Piesy

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