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Hello again!

Just finished my 3rd track titled Draconian (Untongue).

The vision for this song was simple, create something harsh and severe with heavy guitar influences.

I'm still pretty new to the producing music scene so I know I have a lot to learn and a long ways to go too.

Constructive feedback/comments are more than welcomed.

Hope you enjoy!

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Hi ExGauge,

I liked it
The Intro white noise was a little harsh for me, I think it needs turning down or EQing a little.
I like the guitar esq synth its nice. The vocal samples are pretty sweet as well. That plucky string guitar sound gives it almost an indian vibe.
Nice change up at 1:50. I thought something was a little loud around the 2:40 mark, maybe the sweeping siren type noise? Perhaps that needs to be made a little more subtle .

Cheers,
Piesy

MrPies wrote:Hi ExGauge,

I liked it
The Intro white noise was a little harsh for me, I think it needs turning down or EQing a little.
I like the guitar esq synth its nice. The vocal samples are pretty sweet as well. That plucky string guitar sound gives it almost an indian vibe.
Nice change up at 1:50. I thought something was a little loud around the 2:40 mark, maybe the sweeping siren type noise? Perhaps that needs to be made a little more subtle .

Cheers,
Piesy

Thank you for your response. I completely agree with you, I went back and listened to it again - you're spot on. I really appreciate the tips.

I'm currently producing on DT 770 Pro 80ohm headphones... i'm in serious need of nice speakers haha. Once I move into my new place, i'll invest in upgrading my sound for sure.

The headphones I am using right this minute came free with my phone
My flat mates probably wouldn't appreciate me using my speakers. Looking to get a new pair of seinheisers but they are like £300....I can't justify the cost!