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Sirens - Daybreaker
Posted: Fri Aug 09, 2013 1:26 am
by Sirens
Hi,
This is my new tune, hope you enjoy,comment, download etc...
Sirens - Daybreaker:
https://soundcloud.com/sirens-4/daybreaker
Re: Sirens - Daybreaker
Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2013 3:07 am
by Soul_Of_Seun
The transition into the breakdown is a bit sudden. Not sure how else to describe it. The chords on this are nice however, with good attention to detail. Just a bit long and could use some rearrangement. at 9 minutes it gets a bit repetitive. I'm not sure about that lead about 6:50 into the song as well. Bit out of place and too detuned. This was a very nice idea that could be strengthened with adjustments to structure.