My first Dubstep song that I think is worth something.

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Metastaphia
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My first Dubstep song that I think is worth something.

Post by Metastaphia » Tue Sep 03, 2013 1:36 am

Please give me as much feedback as possible, and if there is anything that I should know to make my music better let me know.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pwjlGsxG6i4

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wehlfest
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Re: My first Dubstep song that I think is worth something.

Post by wehlfest » Tue Sep 03, 2013 1:49 am

I like the piano sections, the melodic sections.

Not a big fan of the wubs, very generic sounding.

The drums are a bit generic as well.

Ditch the wubs, focus on the melody and drums and you'll have a tune!

Also, try to upload a work in progress to soundcloud. Most people might shy away from a youtube link.
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Re: My first Dubstep song that I think is worth something.

Post by LogiSpark » Tue Sep 03, 2013 1:51 am

Hella amounts of clipping man :( Way to much piano and it seems like you just messed around with midi files and put them in. No organized kick/snare pattern.

DID YOU EVEN EQ MAN?

Your transitions are horrible thought m8. Well you tried, but this is rubbish. You have a long way to go...








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