Onyx- Mendacious (dubstep?)

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Onyxcloud
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Onyx- Mendacious (dubstep?)

Post by Onyxcloud » Sat Sep 21, 2013 3:20 am


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Re: Onyx- Mendacious (dubstep?)

Post by rockonin » Sat Sep 21, 2013 1:05 pm

Feedback:

There's too much reverb. Especially on the main chord synth.
Have some more variance in the sound design. The main chord synth pretty much plays throughout the arrangement. Drop it in a section or two and introduce a new sound.
The bass (not the sub) needs to be a little louder.
Add some variance in the melodies chord structures.
Not sure if the drums 'sit' well in the mix.

I like the track. Good work.
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Re: Onyx- Mendacious (dubstep?)

Post by Onyxcloud » Sun Sep 22, 2013 12:23 am

I see what you mean rockonin, I will try that out. thank you for the honesty.

I like the tunes in your sig man. dope.

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