Drums are a bit on the quiet side, so when you've got the electro stabs and midrange bass hitting, they're getting a bit drowned out. Would suggest another look at the mixdown to get the levels up a bit.
Re: Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep
Posted: Thu Oct 17, 2013 12:43 pm
by Sure_Fire
I'd take a look at the arrangement, some of the notes playing are a little off key, and a lot of the noises are very random sounding. The section at 2:53 sounded a little better, more musical than the rest of the track. Probably need to listen to some more melodic music, I'd suggest some Dream Theater or Symphony X, I grew up listening to progressive metal so that's where I get most of my musicality from.
Also, Try monoizing the bottom part of the kick drum, you've get some very low frequencies coming through in stereo. Basslane by tone projects is an awesome vst for that, only need to make the bottom 200hz ish mono.
Re: Digital lyrics - Electro Dubstep
Posted: Thu Oct 17, 2013 2:15 pm
by dlyrics
thanks for your message!
yeah the mix could be better, but i did my best ahah (i used few monitoring speakers ands rooms)
i dont know if i freeze all my instruments and restart a mix in an other ableton file.... maybe one day...
I agree with you with the great section in 2mn53 maybe i will keep it longer, but its not the spirit i want to give to this track
(more complextro)
maybe i will keep it longer, but its not the spirit i want to give to this track