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My first track I'm submitting

Post by massimoz » Tue Oct 22, 2013 12:49 am

What do you guys think? Been getting back into producing since July, so not been doing it for long, but feeling like I'm getting thereSoundcloud
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Re: My first track I'm submitting

Post by zosomagik » Tue Oct 22, 2013 1:12 am

I like the idea and the build up was really nice. The synth sounds got a little too busy IMO, but the progression was nice. The drums could have been a little punchier, but I'm listening on earbuds so what do I know.
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Re: My first track I'm submitting

Post by wub » Tue Oct 22, 2013 6:40 am

Agree with the above, track gets quite busy in the middle and the mixdown becomes cluttered at the expense of the drums. Maybe another look at the mixdown to give them some space to come through a bit more.
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Re: My first track I'm submitting

Post by massimoz » Tue Oct 22, 2013 8:11 am

Thanks very much guys, I'll work on it now! :)
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