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Sciatica-Cosmos (Chill/Dark)
Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2013 8:13 pm
by sciaticamusic
Chill and uplifting dubstep song I made. Also has some dark parts with heavy sub work. Kinda reminds me of Ganja White Night.
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Re: Sciatica-Cosmos (Chill/Dark)
Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2013 8:19 pm
by sciaticamusic
sorry for the double post. Still new here.
Re: Sciatica-Cosmos (Chill/Dark)
Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2013 9:36 pm
by titchbit
Once the song drops at 1:36ish you need way more percussion. It sounds really empty. I would also turn the BPM up a few BPMs.
Re: Sciatica-Cosmos (Chill/Dark)
Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2013 6:05 am
by wub
Agree with the above comments, track does feel a little empty at times and more than a little ploddy with it's rhythm.
Re: Sciatica-Cosmos (Chill/Dark)
Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2013 8:20 pm
by sciaticamusic
dubunked wrote:Once the song drops at 1:36ish you need way more percussion. It sounds really empty. I would also turn the BPM up a few BPMs.
wub wrote:Agree with the above comments, track does feel a little empty at times and more than a little ploddy with it's rhythm.
Thanks for the feedback. Definitely needs some more work to fill in those empty spots. What do you mean by ploddy exactly?
Re: Sciatica-Cosmos (Chill/Dark)
Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 6:12 am
by wub
The pace/rhythm of the track is a little too slow and monotonous, I guess?
Re: Sciatica-Cosmos (Chill/Dark)
Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 1:19 pm
by Sioux
The stuff is right up my street!

Both the ideas and production qualities are pretty appealing to my tastes

The only things that I would zero-in on would be snare sounding a bit too hollow (bass drowning the low ends of it perhaps?) and the "Yoi" bass sound that popped up a few times, but that's just a pet peeve from it being used quite a lot over the past few years.
Really enjoyable to listen to overall so kudos

Re: Sciatica-Cosmos (Chill/Dark)
Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 8:46 pm
by sciaticamusic
Sioux wrote:The stuff is right up my street!

Both the ideas and production qualities are pretty appealing to my tastes

The only things that I would zero-in on would be snare sounding a bit too hollow (bass drowning the low ends of it perhaps?) and the "Yoi" bass sound that popped up a few times, but that's just a pet peeve from it being used quite a lot over the past few years.
Really enjoyable to listen to overall so kudos

Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it.maybe a little too much sub bass. and yea that bass is definitely over used, just thought it sounded right in this.