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Elyone Junior - SIGHT [Deep, Dark, Dubstep]
Posted: Thu Nov 28, 2013 12:18 pm
by Elyone Junior
Please let me know what you think!
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Cheers!
Re: Elyone Junior - SIGHT [Deep, Dark, Dubstep]
Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 7:17 am
by wub
Felt the tune was twice as long as it needed to be. After the drop finishes around 3m40s, the second half of the tune doesn't really add anything in terms of variation. Just feels like the same tune repeated over again.
Maybe consider a few variations on the drum programming, or swapping over some elements to give some variety.
Re: Elyone Junior - SIGHT [Deep, Dark, Dubstep]
Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 3:43 pm
by Echoi
Have to agree with the Wubsta, around 4.30 would be perfect for this track, not saying it's bad though, I liked it, some nice little percs in there, and nice bass too.
Re: Elyone Junior - SIGHT [Deep, Dark, Dubstep]
Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 9:46 pm
by Bloodshøt
The drums are sweet, very festival-ey. I could imagine hearing this at Shambhala! I do agree with above comments as well, with dank dubz follow the KISS rule, Keep It Short and Sweet
Re: Elyone Junior - SIGHT [Deep, Dark, Dubstep]
Posted: Sat Nov 30, 2013 1:44 am
by GoblinGuide
Definately too long, I think you could also try breaking up that section after 1:50, maybe build it up more because that rim-shot rhythm is f*ing awesome. Maybe end it there