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BRUV - Slow [Dubstep]
Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2013 8:47 pm
by BIG
I am pretty new to producing EDM so here is the first song I released. I tried to incorporate a synth that sounds something like a p0gman/ d jhasta bass.
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Re: BRUV - Slow [Dubstep]
Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2013 7:23 am
by Echoi
Right, there seems to be some distortion in places where the kick hits? Quite a laboured listen really, constant kick snare pattern made the track quite drone like, and random synth lines dropped here there and everywhere made this seem as though it had no direction. I suppose that sounds quite harsh considering you're a beginner, not my intention, but those are the things you should be looking at.
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Re: BRUV - Slow [Dubstep]
Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2013 2:17 pm
by HIGH10
Not bad for your first track.
I actually like those wobbles at 1:09 - 1:22. But it needs more structure. Some parts sound like you just randomly mashed in the wobble parts to the beat. And the pitched down piano (?) part gets annoying after a certain time. Also put another snare/clap on some snare hits maybe. It makes the beat sound more interesting.
