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AMG
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by AMG » Tue Dec 10, 2013 5:05 am
To be honest I'll let you know I have a biased opinion on the whole trap sound. I can't really stand it unless someone can create a fresh twist to it. It's not horribly produced as far as trap goes, but it doesn't do anything to keep my attention. And maybe you aren't really going for innovative, but it follows the typical 'trap" formula in terms of the sounds you're using. You may even be letting this track breathe too much and without that element of surprise it kind of lulls on. Good luck and keep making music.
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koncide
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by koncide » Tue Dec 10, 2013 8:08 am
You should work on the punchiness of those drums, especially the kick which is quite hard to hear atm.
Trap drums should slap you about a bit.
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Modern Day Monsters
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by Modern Day Monsters » Thu Dec 12, 2013 6:26 pm
@AMG Thank you for taking a listen. And thank you for your feedback it is greatly appreciated!
@Koncide Will do. Thanks for the heads up on the drum sounds. I will work on getting them to stand out a bit more on the next go around. I appreciate the feedback! Thank you!
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iliveinmyguitar
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by iliveinmyguitar » Fri Dec 13, 2013 3:37 am
You need to get some rap over this I think. Other than what everyone said, overall, the track is sounding solid!
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Echoi
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by Echoi » Fri Dec 13, 2013 4:25 pm
Listened to this yesterday but didn't comment.
I dunno man, there's something about the whole trap sound that I seem to find, well, it makes me cringe for some reason. But I loved the synth work here, has a real element of doom about it, and I like that. Nice well rounded mix too.
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bxrdj
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by bxrdj » Fri Dec 13, 2013 5:46 pm
I like this one, maybe the vocal samples need a little touch up the rest sounds very solid
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Eye_siC
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by Eye_siC » Fri Dec 13, 2013 6:23 pm
it seems like that pad at the drop could be out of tune by one note? other than that I thought that the ideas were pretty cool, and the mixdown was pretty decent.
Also I agree the vocals could use a little bit more work.(effects, reverb, etc.)
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Modern Day Monsters
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by Modern Day Monsters » Sun Dec 15, 2013 6:56 pm
Thank you all for the feedback! It is greatly appreciated. Also, I just realized that the way I posted this only shows 1 track from the album. If you have some time please take a look at my soundcloud page and give the other 6 tracks a listen. Again, thank you all for your feedback!
https://soundcloud.com/subxl
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Rezzo
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by Rezzo » Sun Dec 15, 2013 7:58 pm
Love the pan work on the snare. Sounds like you have your trap game pretty locked up. Liked pretty much all of it up until the "hoh" uh" "waa" came in. Kinda seemed out of place. Other than that good job.
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