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Shackles And The Ascent Part 1 (Wip)
Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2013 10:03 pm
by re6ter
https://soundcloud.com/strider_white/sh ... -1/s-0wmDj
Cooked this WIP up in a few hours on maschine. has some nice swing, cant tell if there is too much sub (my akg's dont have the best bass response)
let me know wat u think so far.
Re: Shackles And The Ascent Part 1 (Wip)
Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 3:29 am
by iliveinmyguitar
I listen to it on wifi speakers so I didn't get to hear much bass. Its a cool vibe but you could definitely improve on it. Add some variation to the chord progression and maybe layer down some melodies. Also, I think you can find a punchier kick.
Re: Shackles And The Ascent Part 1 (Wip)
Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 4:28 pm
by Echoi
Yea man, was getting into that, when it dropped I thought this mix sounds odd, the way everything sounded together. But then it quickly grew on me, nice work so far.
Re: Shackles And The Ascent Part 1 (Wip)
Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 5:44 pm
by bxrdj
Sounds solid so far, I like the breaks in the mix, maybe compress the kick a bit more
Re: Shackles And The Ascent Part 1 (Wip)
Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 6:36 pm
by Eye_siC
nice chords/melody.
the beat is also very fitting. your style reminds me a lot of jafu/b9.
good work!
Re: Shackles And The Ascent Part 1 (Wip)
Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 6:40 pm
by bennyfroobs
bass its too wide imo, feels weird in my ears, make it mono
and is it just me or is the kick way over to the left?
good start tho man!
Re: Shackles And The Ascent Part 1 (Wip)
Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 6:40 pm
by bennyfroobs
mebs cos it was 2 the left
Re: Shackles And The Ascent Part 1 (Wip)
Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 7:39 pm
by re6ter
ya the kick is all wanky. good idea to make the sub mono bro. Ight ill post the update a bit later tonight (gonna fix the vols too.
) thanks for the feedback guys
Re: Shackles And The Ascent Part 1 (Wip)
Posted: Sat Dec 14, 2013 6:19 am
by re6ter