Robots in the mist - Feedback Please

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BarJ
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Robots in the mist - Feedback Please

Post by BarJ » Mon Jan 20, 2014 8:42 am

Hey Guys,

Just released a new track which i was working on. Trying to keep things simple still. Allot of stuff nowdays is over complicated.

I would appreciate a listena nd some feedback please :) ..

https://soundcloud.com/#barjent/robots-in-the-mist

Thanks Allot

Barj

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mistayif
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Re: Robots in the mist - Feedback Please

Post by mistayif » Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:57 am

you need to edit the link as it's incorrect.

the wubs don't sound completely in tune with the melodic bells. try maybe having more than one wobble and alternating them to keep things interesting, and also little variations in the drum beat

BarJ
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Re: Robots in the mist - Feedback Please

Post by BarJ » Tue Jan 21, 2014 9:01 am

Thank allot really appreciate it :)

Will be working on more and taking this adivce with me :)

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