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This song is 170bpm. Looking for critical analysis and tips on where I can improve

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Thank you

Feels like the music for one of those youtubeclips featuring really cool people doing cool things on skateboards or bmxbikes... or rather, the even more cool milliondollar photograopher shooting them (look for chase jarvis on YT)...
I have difficulties understanding this style, so its difficult for me to give any useful critique... It allways feels like theres too much going on, but thats part of the style as well... But sometimes I think that the two lead synths clash with that midrange stabby synth that occurs in the drops (difficult to explain wich one, i'm sorry). But I cant really to put my finger on it, I just feel that theres one or two elements that really dont need to go on at the same time...
The large section in the middle before the second drop, i was wondering if it could be a little more subdued, maybe filter out some of the bassfreqs in the drums or something like that, just to enhance the contrast between that and the massive drop.

Love the little distorted "aah" in the build up btw. It reminds me of the Paradise lost cover of small time boy (also on YT).

/Emm (the)

Hey thanks dude, glad you stopped by. Very detailed write up, and lengthy, so I was able to get a good feel for what you felt about this tune.

That said, I've released a completely new song and uploaded, I took your advice but mainly worked on mixing some frequencies in the drop. I also completely changed the vox, hopefully you like them, I think they're cooler and add more the drop. I fixed the eq on the stab, at least I think I did, may still be too drastic and apparent for your tastes.

Thanks again man, please let me know what you think if you hear the new one.

Dustwyrm

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