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Not sure if it's done yet, but this was a really fun project.

*Constructive* criticism is GREATLY appreciated. <3

Thanks, guys.

you're on the right track here. You have good sounds through the track.

I think you just need to work on the vocals and bass arrangements. I can see where you are going with it, but it feels a little too choppy as you change between the two. I'd be looking at making them flow a little nicer and be a little more cohesive by playing the vocals out.

Would love to see the finished product!

Bass Institute wrote:you're on the right track here. You have good sounds through the track.

I think you just need to work on the vocals and bass arrangements. I can see where you are going with it, but it feels a little too choppy as you change between the two. I'd be looking at making them flow a little nicer and be a little more cohesive by playing the vocals out.

Would love to see the finished product!

Made some very subtle changes to the voice, added some echo so it sounds less choppy. Subtle but I feel that it flows a little better now. Lemme know what you think

When it drops mate, the kick on the one is missing (first drop)? Im not sure as Im on laptop speakers.
I agree with bass institute. Try blending the vocals and bass. Maybe lower the volume on the bass a tad bit and compress the vocals and bass into a single bus.
Other than that, solid track!

Fuck my life, I made changes to the vocals to make em flow better and when I cancelled my Pro account it cancelled the revision -.-

Will post soon!

Scratch that, I got Pro back up. Uploading revisions now.

@123kidd,
I'll try that out.