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Zargon - Lost Dog (Deep/House)
Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2014 3:04 pm
by andyyhitscar
Soundcloud
I know it's repetitive but that's what I was going for so please don't comment on that. Some constructive feedback would be nice.
Re: Zargon - Lost Dog (Deep/House)
Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2014 4:20 pm
by elyhess
really loving that synth, some variation halfway through the track would definitely make this shit poppin. The drums could use some clarity, they seem a bit quiet especially the kick and those hats. Overall i would just say variety - but if your going for repetitiveness then it seems about right. I would just say work on bringing out the drums.
might sound cool if every 8 bars you dropped down the main synth riff 5 notes, and then bring it back to that main melody -- just a thought
love those bongos you bring in around 2:50 ish, i wanna hear more of that!