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Zulishanti - Automata (atmo,melo,174)

Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2014 3:34 pm
by Talált
Soundcloud

feedback appreciated as always. otherwise my outlets are limited, you can support me by following on soundcloud.com/zulishanti or facebook.com/zulishanti, feel free to share, there is a free download up for the moment. ;-)

thanks

Re: Zulishanti - Automata (atmo,melo,174)

Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2014 6:07 pm
by JockMCPlop
Hi!
0:00 Nice chords, nice sounds on top, very smooth
0:15-45 That is one massive rise haha love it
0:45-1:30 Maybe some little subtle fx sounds in the high end could just bring this in even further.
1:30-2:00 Nice beat. The drop doesn't feel as huge as i expected though...
2:00 Was hoping for something a little more interesting with the hihats. Maybe some percussion added in there.
3:00 The chords are getting a little bit stale by now. Maybe an extra third chord at some point would jolt me out of listening on autopilot if you know what i mean.
3:30 the lead sound could do with a bit more modulation, or swapping to a new lead after a bit.
4:00-5:40 The pad sound is absolutely massive still. Maybe a bit too big at this point. It might be nice to let some other sounds take over for a bit.

Great production skills on show here. I think the main problem i have is that the pad sound takes over the whole tune and is a little bit too much after 5 minutes of it. Other than that its a very good tune!

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Here's a song i recently put up, feedback would be lovely!