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Hi. This is my 4th track. I have received comments from this forum about my tracks and I did some improvement accordingly. Hope you like it.
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nice chords in the intro:)

The bassline seems a bit messy in my opinion. Maybe if the structure of the riff was a bit clearer it would help? But for 4th track it's pretty good. Keep at it!

Thank you so much for the comment. about the messy bassline, I understand why this happens the structure was quite messy

or maybe its just a bit to loud (the bassline)

khaoto wrote:or maybe its just a bit to loud (the bassline)

hmm, too loud? I thought it was not loud enough so i make the bassline louder I guess thats what makes it too loud for you guys, I got numb when creating it lol

Yeah, the bassline is slightly too loud and there are some messy parts here and there, but I gotta say that for the 4th track, this is not bad at all. Also the kick is too thin for my tastes, and it really doesn't punch thru in the drop. These are my 2 cents.

Zippolisko wrote:Yeah, the bassline is slightly too loud and there are some messy parts here and there, but I gotta say that for the 4th track, this is not bad at all. Also the kick is too thin for my tastes, and it really doesn't punch thru in the drop. These are my 2 cents.

Thank you for the feed back :3

Sounds pretty good man. Other than the bassline being a little loud, pretty solid for it only being your 4th track.

throw some external fx on your basses

CRoW_Dubstep wrote:throw some external fx on your basses

MissingPluto wrote:Sounds pretty good man. Other than the bassline being a little loud, pretty solid for it only being your 4th track.

Thank you all for the feed backs, it really really help me out a LOT

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WaveForm wrote:Donaldbeebi » Hey, Increase your drums and compress your bass and sound design. Also learn how mix down a bit better. The sound design itself is great. Cheers!

Yeah, I dont like the drums too, thanks for taking your time btw

Not bad at all for a 4th track. Bass is to loud on the drop but the song layout is pretty solid. Not sure I like that weird synth melody that comes in later on the drop don't think it fits in with the style but maybe that's just me.

HigherDose wrote:Not bad at all for a 4th track. Bass is to loud on the drop but the song layout is pretty solid. Not sure I like that weird synth melody that comes in later on the drop don't think it fits in with the style but maybe that's just me.

Its not just you :3

Sweet song. I cant say much about it that hasnt been said. Your intro was sweet. After the first drop (at 2:18) where its juist chords and drums playing has like no subs tho i think itd fit more if it had heavy subs with long notes. It just seemed out of place coming from the drop to having no subs. The second drop isnt so bad cuz you add that bass with those chords.

ChrisPlatow wrote:Sweet song. I cant say much about it that hasnt been said. Your intro was sweet. After the first drop (at 2:18) where its juist chords and drums playing has like no subs tho i think itd fit more if it had heavy subs with long notes. It just seemed out of place coming from the drop to having no subs. The second drop isnt so bad cuz you add that bass with those chords.

ty for taking your time, i will try adding sub bass, i can imagine how much better it is :>

Very solid for your 4th track. All constructive feedback has been given allready, and I agree with them.

I'm not really into this style, but that's just a matter of taste. I think the track is pretty good, just a few things about the bass that is maybe a bit to big and/or to loud. And the synth melody that might not really fit in there.

tl;dr: Nice track, agreeing with feedback allready given.