Castle - Lazy (deep jazz/percussive)

[andyyhitscar]

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Let me know what you think!

[Fastworker]

Id take a 320 of that and play it at 140 really

[Graydon]

Great ideas going on here, I would have liked to see more variation in the atmosphere/melody you got going on there, maybe add some more effects on it, throw in a smooth jazz sax or something as well to add more flavour.

[chrondor]

definitely needs some variation especially in the melodies but good ideas represented

[RIG-RAG]

Yeah ill third some variation, and good ideas. But dont let it discourage you getting a good idea is half the battle, then arrangement.

As far as mix bring that pad down a bit like 10 db maybe more.
Look into structuring as well, most tracks move in 16 bar sections or 32.
your intro seems to be only 8 bars long unless you consider the next 24 your intro as well, but your kick has a good amount of sub bass and most people don't put sub in the intro.

Just a few things i think might help for over all structure, unless you wanna go make some crazy type stuff with no structure then forget everything i mention.

cheers man

[andyyhitscar]

Id take a 320 of that and play it at 140 really

bumped it up to 140 while i was practicing mixing. sounds dope!

[andyyhitscar]

Great ideas going on here, I would have liked to see more variation in the atmosphere/melody you got going on there, maybe add some more effects on it, throw in a smooth jazz sax or something as well to add more flavour.

Hey thanks man, I'll try that sax idea!

[andyyhitscar]

definitely needs some variation especially in the melodies but good ideas represented

Thanks man much obliged!