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this was made completely random was playing guitar and had an idea to make a few chords sound more electronic what do you think?

This is pretty cool, the sounds have a very mellowed feel, which compliments the key well. The only thing that stands out is the variation of the vocals seems to slightly lack, although the pitch and progression of the vocals were good, the rhythm of them feels a bit short in a couple of spots. i would try removing the delay from them, rearranging them so they fill out more space naturally instead of relaying on the delay to do that, of course you can put that same delay back on once you filled out the vocals with out, just be sure to dial it back some since you've compensated.

Cheers man