First Time Dubstep tunes. Need feedback and advice maybe?!?!

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First Time Dubstep tunes. Need feedback and advice maybe?!?!

Post by gkmusic » Mon Mar 24, 2008 9:39 pm

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"Sketches of my Sweetheart"

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Post by sulako » Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:24 pm

Wikkid track, would like to hear an instrumental mix as well, love the bass and the synth- nice.

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Post by kwality » Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:26 pm

Aight man, I'm no expert but I'll my best -

I'd really look at stripping it back. The best advice I've been given is to not be afraid of stipping it down. I'd look at the arrangement and maybe save the main bass sound for when there aren't vocals. You've done a good job with vocals and the cutups so let them take the weight of the tune. Maybe just run a sub when there's vocals? They say a listener can only really take in three things at once - I wasn't sure what I should be concentrating on with that track.

I like "This room..." and reckon "Sketches..." could do with a similar stripped back arrangement. It has good movement and keeps interesting.

That's just me though!

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Post by gkmusic » Tue Mar 25, 2008 1:06 am

cheers that was good advice still!
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Post by cursedc » Tue Mar 25, 2008 1:15 am

On sketches, remove some of the gated reverb (a touch) and glitch the vocals a tad bit more. Shift the pitch in a couple of places...but thats personal preference.

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Post by legend4ry » Sat May 31, 2008 1:33 pm

Arrrrrr my boy finally signed up, out to the Groovekiller :lol:


Tune big man, as I said a while back its good, got a good groove to it but I think you should add another drop, change some things around!


Still gotta finish hope n prayer bruv, tunes not serious.
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