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First Time Dubstep tunes. Need feedback and advice maybe?!?!

Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 9:39 pm
by gkmusic
www.myspace.com/djchapter

Check:

"Sketches of my Sweetheart"

Need feed back, safe

Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:24 pm
by sulako
Wikkid track, would like to hear an instrumental mix as well, love the bass and the synth- nice.

Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:26 pm
by kwality
Aight man, I'm no expert but I'll my best -

I'd really look at stripping it back. The best advice I've been given is to not be afraid of stipping it down. I'd look at the arrangement and maybe save the main bass sound for when there aren't vocals. You've done a good job with vocals and the cutups so let them take the weight of the tune. Maybe just run a sub when there's vocals? They say a listener can only really take in three things at once - I wasn't sure what I should be concentrating on with that track.

I like "This room..." and reckon "Sketches..." could do with a similar stripped back arrangement. It has good movement and keeps interesting.

That's just me though!

Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 1:06 am
by gkmusic
cheers that was good advice still!

Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 1:15 am
by cursedc
On sketches, remove some of the gated reverb (a touch) and glitch the vocals a tad bit more. Shift the pitch in a couple of places...but thats personal preference.

B+ and a happy dance.

Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 1:33 pm
by legend4ry
Arrrrrr my boy finally signed up, out to the Groovekiller :lol:


Tune big man, as I said a while back its good, got a good groove to it but I think you should add another drop, change some things around!


Still gotta finish hope n prayer bruv, tunes not serious.