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thedubwarrior
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The Dub Warrior - No Worries In the Dubhall

Post by thedubwarrior » Mon Apr 07, 2008 9:19 pm

New tune... constructive feedback appreciated...

The Dub Warrior - No Worries In the Dubhall
http://thotskee.com/mp3/thedubwarrior/t ... orries.mp3

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Post by xthewiddler » Mon Apr 07, 2008 9:58 pm

nice tune man great creativity!

i like it because its really laid back and dark

my suggestion would be to find a better mix, it sounds a bit muffled

the "bass" sample is just extra i think you can do without it

because the singing sample is plenty good

keep up the good work mate!

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thank you for the feedback!

Post by thedubwarrior » Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:52 pm

@xTheWiddler

thanks for taking a listen. i appreciate your time.

thanks a bunch for the feedback too. all great info. which bass do you think I should nuke? the wobble one? the 808'ish one or the grainy one at the end?

thanks again!!

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Post by xthewiddler » Mon Apr 07, 2008 11:55 pm

haha i think you miss understood

when the lady says "bass" at one point, you dont need it

the rest of the bass sounds good, just needs a bit of mastering and eq work

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Post by xthewiddler » Tue Apr 08, 2008 12:04 am

here i did a little mini mastering session to boost the overall level

eq it out a little, widen the stereo image, and add some punch and clarity

enjoy!

http://bikinieditorial.com/yoni/minimas ... Master.mp3

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thank you for the feedback pt II

Post by thedubwarrior » Tue Apr 08, 2008 1:47 am

@xTheWiddler

i understand on the bass change. you mean remove the "bass" vocal sample. I am totally with you. great suggestion.

mastering... uhgg... that's deffo one of my weaker points. but i am hungry to learn. thanks for the direction i'll work with the items you mentioned for sure.

thanks for the EQ'd mini mix as well. i have a VST that is supposed to help with EQ and mastering. I need to get it working again.

thanks again for your feedback and suggestions. awesome and helpful. i appreciate your time...

massive respect!

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Post by xthewiddler » Tue Apr 08, 2008 3:22 am

no problem

what program(s) are you working with

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Post by thedubwarrior » Tue Apr 08, 2008 3:58 am

@xTheWiddler

using acid 5 at the moment.

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