First tune

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flex_ible
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First tune

Post by flex_ible » Wed Jul 02, 2008 11:10 pm

Reading the forums for a few weeks, first attempt at production.

http://www.divshare.com/download/4856285-079

something is missing from it i feel, but feedback and any constructive criticism is very welcome.
whats good whats bad. cheers

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Post by flex_ible » Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:30 am

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Post by hugh » Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:03 am

i would really change up the tune at some point so you get a different groove going, at the moment its just plodding along without really going anywhere.
plus some of the synths are really not to my taste (personal thing), such as the wobbles near the start and at about 2:30, they just dont sound clean too me.
however, i do like the plucked instrument whatever that is, just keep practicing.
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