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Realityshift - Fear
Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:13 pm
by realityshift
New track finished. Any feedback welcome
http://www.myspace.com/realityshifting
Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 6:23 pm
by realityshift
bump up
Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 7:24 pm
by Tangka
hello
please post virb or myspace links so that we dont have to spend time downloading a track we've never heard before
I never thought of this when i started up myself, but as time went on and I've spent so many countless hours on here it started becoming an issue. I personally never download a track I cant listen to first.
no sweat man
and now that ive made this comment i feel bad not listening to your track so...
It's OK. The percussion is just in a perpetual loop and the bass is not very memorable IMO but i like the pads and ambient noises very much, well done in that respect. Maybe dedicate some attention to track arrangement as well?
peace
Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:32 am
by realityshift
thanks, makes sense
also good point with the percussion.
what exactly do you mean with track arrangement in this track? the moment of the breaks? the intro?
anyway here's the myspace link, I also updated the first post:
http://www.myspace.com/realityshifting
Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 4:57 pm
by DFRNT
I'd say the intention was spot-on, but the execution was slightly lacking. Not because of ability, just because you'll learn with every release.
I'd say you can beef it up or make it more dubby - whatever way you take it you'll end up with a bit more of a memorable track I reckon.