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Realityshift - Fear

Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:13 pm
by realityshift
New track finished. Any feedback welcome :wink:

http://www.myspace.com/realityshifting

Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 6:23 pm
by realityshift
bump up

Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 7:24 pm
by Tangka
hello

please post virb or myspace links so that we dont have to spend time downloading a track we've never heard before ;)

I never thought of this when i started up myself, but as time went on and I've spent so many countless hours on here it started becoming an issue. I personally never download a track I cant listen to first.
no sweat man :)

and now that ive made this comment i feel bad not listening to your track so...

It's OK. The percussion is just in a perpetual loop and the bass is not very memorable IMO but i like the pads and ambient noises very much, well done in that respect. Maybe dedicate some attention to track arrangement as well?

peace

Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 9:32 am
by realityshift
thanks, makes sense :wink:

also good point with the percussion.

what exactly do you mean with track arrangement in this track? the moment of the breaks? the intro?


anyway here's the myspace link, I also updated the first post:

http://www.myspace.com/realityshifting

Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 4:57 pm
by DFRNT
I'd say the intention was spot-on, but the execution was slightly lacking. Not because of ability, just because you'll learn with every release.

I'd say you can beef it up or make it more dubby - whatever way you take it you'll end up with a bit more of a memorable track I reckon.